Address review comments

Author: flip1995

posts/2024-02-16-Clippy-deprecating-feature-cargo-clippy.md

@@ -9,12 +9,12 @@ Since Clippy [`v0.0.97`] and before it was shipped with `rustup`, Clippy
 implicitly added a `feature = "cargo-clippy"` config[^1] when linting your code
 with `cargo clippy`.
 
-[^1]: It's likely, that you didn't even know that Clippy implicitly sets this
+[^1]: It's likely that you didn't even know that Clippy implicitly sets this
     config (which was not a Cargo feature). This is intentional, as we stopped
     advertising and documenting this a long time ago.
 
-Back in the day (2016) this was necessary to allow, warn or deny lints with
-attributes:
+Back in the day (2016) this was necessary to allow, warn or deny Clippy lints
+using attributes:
 
 ```rust
 #[cfg_attr(feature = "cargo-clippy", allow(clippy_lint_name))]
@@ -59,27 +59,27 @@ In addition, check your `.cargo/config` file for:
 rustflags = ["-Aclippy::..."]
 ```
 
-This file you have to update yourself, by either changing it to `cfg(clippy)` or
-taking this opportunity to transition to [setting lint levels in
-`Cargo.toml`][cargo-lints] directly.
+If you have this config, you will have to update it yourself, by either changing
+it to `cfg(clippy)` or taking this opportunity to transition to [setting lint
+levels in `Cargo.toml`][cargo-lints] directly.
 
 ## Motivation for Deprecation
 
 Currently, there's a [call for testing], in order to stabilize [checking
 conditional compilation at compile time][rfc-3013], aka `cargo check
 -Zcheck-cfg`. If we were to keep the `feature = "cargo-clippy"` config, users
-would start seeing a lot of warnings when running `cargo clippy`. To work around
-this, they would have to add a dummy feature to their `Cargo.toml` in order to
-silence those warnings:
+would start seeing a lot of warnings on their `feature = "cargo-clippy"`
+conditions. To work around this, they would either need to allow the lin or have
+to add a dummy feature to their `Cargo.toml` in order to silence those warnings:
 
 ```toml
 [features]
 cargo-clippy = []
 ```
 
-We didn't think this would be user friendly and decided, that we want to
+We didn't think this would be user friendly, and decided that instead we want to
 deprecate the implicit `feature = "cargo-clippy"` config and replace it with the
-`clippy` config instead.
+`clippy` config.
 
 [`v0.0.97`]: https://github.com/rust-lang/rust-clippy/blob/61daf674eaf17f3b504c51f01b4ee63fac47dfcf/CHANGELOG.md?plain=0#0097--2016-11-03
 [rfc-3013]: https://github.com/rust-lang/rfcs/pull/3013