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LGTM. FWIW: I tried matching the pattern (in regards to the use of "your") we use in the
new angular.io
migration guides (example)
I agree that angular.io uses a lot of you/your (I had checked that prior to making these changes), so I don't think that is a problem. It was just about being consistent all the way through the doc. |
I think the docs were better without this change because this introduces passive voice. I think the use of "your" in the current form is fine. |
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@jelbourn this has been updated based on your feedback. Please review for v9 as there are still some typos and other fixes beyond just "the vs your". |
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LGTM.
(cherry picked from commit 8865e78)
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Minor tweaks and a fix for a grammar issue in the guide created in PR #17769.